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"Where is your heart, Alice?"

My heart is where he is
The one whom I waited for
So long in darkness
My mind a refuge
They called me insane
But I knew better
He knew better
His melting eyes saw through me
A bright light seemed to burn me   

"Where is your soul, Alice?"

My soul is in his hands
Molded to pale perfection
I gave it to him
When he first smiled
And said my name
His face scarred by pain
But so gentle in love
I locked us together in time
And threw away the key
I haven't ever submitted this piece by itself, although it has been included in a deviation I did for Alice a long way back.

One of my favorite poems. :) The phrasing...the metaphors...the sweet meaning...it's all perfect for her. :)
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VampireBellaCullen Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2010
Wow! this a great poem!
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Golden-Leaves Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :)
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Splashabelle Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010
It is perfect for her!!! I adore this couple!!! Awesome poem too!!! :D
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Golden-Leaves Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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Splashabelle Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010
You're very welcome!
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